Android 2.0 Article

[Jstein1313]

http://clearsimpletech.blogspot.com/

I wrote a blog which i think a lot of you might find interesting, i'd love your feedback if that wouldn't be too much to ask. I go pretty in depth about the idea behind the android open source and its future in the mobile industry. Hope you enjoy and thanks for any feedback.

[Chokkan]

Good stuff. A few typos, though

Also, I thought Droid was made by Motorola, not HTC. Or did I misunderstand that part of your post?

Anyway, keep up with the blog.

[TheBlur]

Chokkan is right, Droid is supposed to be made by Motorola not HTC. I haven't read the whole article yet but will and hopefully will give you some additional feedback.

[Jstein1313]

Yep you guys are right its made by Motorola, i was just in a G1/Mytouch mindset...thanks for the correction and the replies!

[Jstein1313]

Oh and also i just wanted to apologize about the length, this is mainly more of what would be a featured article...not like the press releases i plan to be covering. I'm hoping to start a website based off the ideals of this blog, if anyone else has the same interests that i discussed in the first post of the blog let me know because I'm looking to form a staff of half a dozen or so people.

[Jstein1313]

BUMP, anybody else have any comments on it?

[Iceberg]

This device is getting less and less impressive everyday.

[thundermax]

why not link to Motorola's official press release? http://mediacenter.motorola.com/cont...8&NewsAreaID=2

[Jstein1313]

why not link to Motorola's official press release? http://mediacenter.motorola.com/cont...8&NewsAreaID=2

Their link wasn't "linking" when i posted it...i'll redo it..thanks

[TheBlur]

I don't mean to be a jerk but I'll tell you the truth. I was going to provide you some feedback and let you know about some minor spelling and grammatical mistakes but you really need to check your work before you post it. I found waaaaaaaaaaay too many spelling and grammatical mistakes that it made it hard to even read the whole story.

My suggestion would be to take some writing classes in college if you get a chance. It should help you structure your sentences better and hopefully with time you'll learn to spell a little better.

Again, I'm not trying to be too harsh but your constant mistakes made it almost unreadable.